Ahurei, please edit your document, and remember that you were suppose to add a hook in title, a whainga ako and a short description about what you are learning, what you enjoyed and what you found challenging. It is on the board, but congratulations on completing all this mahi, it is a lot of mahi and then to transfer onto a presentation is an accomplishment, well done Ahurei.
It's missing the whainga ako, what we've been learning. The hook-in title doesn't make sense and it isn't even spelt properly and it has no capitals.
ReplyDeleteAhurei, please edit your document, and remember that you were suppose to add a hook in title, a whainga ako and a short description about what you are learning, what you enjoyed and what you found challenging. It is on the board, but congratulations on completing all this mahi, it is a lot of mahi and then to transfer onto a presentation is an accomplishment, well done Ahurei.
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